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¿Las palabras son solo letras?
No. Son la verdad en las lágrimas, la razón de ser o no.
Palabras, solo palabras.
Distantes ecos pronunciados al infinito.
Son solo la secuela de tu sonrisa encantadora.
Es la expresión del alma, encontrada.
Es mi voz, es tu espíritu.
Palabras quedas, incoherentes, altisonantes,
estúpidas y malholientes.
Palabras.
Nuestro primer lenguaje.
Después la mirada, apuñalante.
Movimientos bucales, ruidos.
Palabras, que mas da, si no me atrevo a pronunciarlas,
solo a escribirlas.
lo escribi justamente hoy, pensando y revolviendo kosas en mi mentesiha lokja, espero k sea de su agrado
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:iconmuteforme:
muteforme Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005
Una muy buena definición de la base del lenguaje, bastante interesante
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GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005
uy pues muchas gracias^^
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:iconerogenia:
erogenia Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2004
me gusto, me hizo recordar algunas cosas.
gracias
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2004
cosas buenas o malas??
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Malagant Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2004
A palavra é o espirito
Que em tua alma alcança
Quando cançada de viver
Na tua mão ela descança!

Palavra é a vida do teu sangue congelado
Que corre pela vida em tempo parado,
Palavra que marca teu passado no destino
Palavra que aprende com o nosso passado menino!

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Gostei bastante do teu verso! Parabéns =)
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2004
ahi medio le entedi :lol:
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:iconmalagant:
Malagant Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2004
É português é muito parecido com espanhol :P
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2004
si pero algunas palabras no las entiendo :(
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:iconmalagant:
Malagant Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2004
No faz mal, eu entendi teu poema gostei muito =) parabéns *
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2004
gracias!!
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:iconamiba:
Amiba Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004  Professional Photographer
esta es uno de mis favoritos ^^ de hecho trasmite un sentimiento bastante explicito, ahora que lo pienso, todos padecemos los estragos de las palabras alguna vez.. muy bueno chica :hug:
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004
pues si de hecho, pero mas ke eso, es komo a la vez las palabras nos ayudan y nos dañan, pero entendiste el punto y eso es lo importante!!! :D gracias
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Amiba Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004  Professional Photographer
es verdad, tambien soy partidaria de que las palabras pueden herir mas y mas profundo que cualquier otro acto.. :hug:
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004
si. pueden chingar horrores
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:iconignis-vitae:
Ignis-vitae Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2004  Hobbyist
orale esta padre :D me agrada
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2004
gracias :kitty:
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:iconravemex:
ravemex Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2004
me agrado mucho, con dolor mazoquista..
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2004
jejej gracias
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TheEtherealFairy Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004
Si no te puedes expresar directamente con esa persona... hazlo con acertijos :P Me encanta etse poema, ya me puso a reflexionar cañon :O
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GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004
jaja pos si, pero ekis fue algo ia pasadillo, pero igual i me sirve compartirlo
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:iconfarfako:
Farfako Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2004
Palabras.... Son simplemente la manera en la que el hombre acaba con su misma raza :P
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2004
mm io kreo k es mas kon violencia con lo k acaba
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FaRsA Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004   Writer
Orale morra!! Esta bien perro eso!! Y uuuuuu me hiciste darle vuelo a la cabeza bien masiso! Imaginate yo de lirisista y poeta (o un intento de ambos) y tu sales con ese escrito tan realista y a la ves tan subrealista... chaleee me cae que tu vas a terminar teniendo un libro de pensaminetos publicado... Eres muy buena con estas cosas... sigue asi, y porfa sigue escribiendo lo que sientes, realmente reflejas lo que es el arte de la escritura con tus sentimientos... :clap: :faint: :surprised:
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GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004
jeje, muchas gracias amiguis flavio!!
y lo del libro, pos ia veremos.. estaria bien sheedisimo!!! :kiss:
gracias por el comentario
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BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
your cute
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004
thnx
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:iconbigbuddywill:
BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
your welcome
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004
no prob
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:iconbigbuddywill:
BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
:)
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004
stop doin that
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:iconbigbuddywill:
BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
doing what...I cant reamber what I did... I am sorry
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2004
forget it baby!!!
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BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
doing what...I cant reamber what I did
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:iconfnny:
fnny Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
esas malditas palabras, ke mas nos keda!!
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
nada
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elvolante Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2004
si lo siento revuelto, pero esta bien, estoy de acuerdo contigo, sin todo lo que las palabras pueden hacer por gente como nosotros: necesitados de su potencia expresiva, ya habriamos estallado en un subito evento espectacular de pura desesperacion...
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GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
jeje pos no es k este revuelto, sino k asi esta en mi cabeza revuelta
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elvolante Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
el producto de una cabeza revuelta no son cosas revueltas? ja ja! pero esta chido niña! osea te quedo con madre...:P
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
gracias baby
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elvolante Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2004
:)
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2004
jejej :P
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:iconbigbuddywill:
BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
cool I like it :)
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
thnx baby:kis:
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:iconbigbuddywill:
BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
your welcome :kis:
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
hehhe :kiss:
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:iconbigbuddywill:
BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
:date: :)
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:icongothbitch:
GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
:P
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BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
:dance:
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GOTHBITCH Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
.
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BigBuddyWill Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
:crazy: :? :)
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